FLM BLOG Tuesday 29 October

Lately I've been preparing the professional assessment of an old friend's memoir. I found to my shock yesterday that it finishes, without warning, halfway through her (long) life. She has reasons for this. We've agreed I'll reread when she has made some changes to the overall shape, simply by stating at the beginning what she wants to share with the reader, then wrapping up her insights at the end. A work of fiction or non-fiction makes more impact when shaped according to the writer's deep intention. Then it becomes a genuine voyage of discovery, for both parties.

In a fresh phase of my long career as both publisher and published novelist, I turned to writing full-time. And I found that I missed assessing brand-new fiction. So I’ve set up Free Literary Mentor as a completely free manuscript appraisal service to début novelists and their readers. During my professional life in books I’ve assessed, edited, published and reviewed prize-winning fiction and non-fiction, I’ve tutored in literature and novel writing, and was fiction publisher for an international company for twelve years—yet I’ve never lost the excitement of seeing new work. If you’re a novelist seeking constructive critiques, look below and see how Free Literary Mentor might work for you. Readers, check out the latest extract from a new novel—you may be peeking at a forthcoming bestseller. To share an opinion, click on the extract below, or go to the Free Literary Mentor archive, select another and add your comment. 

Latest Extract
The Wolf on the Road Home ~ Sophie Szecsodi ~ Australia

"I think we're in the botanical gardens. And that ..." Veelo points to a large road crossing the river. "I think that's the Tasman Highway. And that's the Croax River. Yes, that's right. They renamed it ages ago. It was the Derwood or Derbunt or something."


"Yeah, that's it. How'd you know?"

"Just stuff I heard around the orphanage."

"Oh." Veelo bows her head. "Anyway, we have to follow the highway to get to Freycinet, I think. We'll have to get a tourist bus."

"Wait a second ... I'm no geography expert, but aren't we going to Launceston?"

Veelo's expression tenses a little, but then relaxes again. "I think we need to go to Freycinet. Because Jay is there. He can help us."

"Who is Jay?"

"Another Elf ..."

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The Mentor’s Critique
The Wolf on the Road Home ~ Sophie Szecsodi

Sophie, since The Wolf on the Road Home is the first volume in an epic series, and it tells of a quest, you’ve done the right thing in your first thirty pages by getting Wolf away on her journey fairly soon. You begin the novel as this young girl wanders the streets of a future Hobart, clad in her orphanage clothes and a wolf hat. She scares the driver of a car, who slows down to look at her but takes off when she snarls at him. She then creeps back to her dormitory and wakes up next morning to the unbearable life of the orphanage. You give the reader ample reason for Wolf to escape her present existence and you make us believe in her flight with Veelo, even though this girl is a stranger to her.

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